And It's Still You..! ! Poem by Bhoobalan Sabari

And It's Still You..! !

Rating: 5.0


A Cerebropuncture in its way
That every drop of you drain away
For I've to live void your stay
Since you said, we aren't okay
And here goes all my pray
Asking your memories, swept away
No more that man from yesterday
So this is how we are to end our play
And there she stands by
Seeing the one last bye...
The memories are about to lie...
Close and open, my eye
Slowly..., I woke up, asking thy,
'I..., I..., I..., Honey, who am I? '

And It's Still You..! !
Friday, November 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm undergoing a surgery to get rid of your memories since you said we aren't going okay. As I can't get rid off you with time, I have to go through this surgery. So I'm praying, once the surgery is done, your memories should be swept away. And you are standing right beside me for the last bye. As I went through the surgery, I'm getting up asking you, 'Honey, who am I? '. Even though I went to the extent of losing all my memories, I can't forget you. Even me, but surely not you..! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 22 November 2015

Painful memories, wished to be excised. Thanks, Bhoobalan

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Bhoobalan Sabari 22 November 2015

Your welcome... And thanks for your time reading..! ! 😊

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2015

Very amazing drafting shared here in this interesting context. Wisely penned.10

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Bhoobalan Sabari 20 November 2015

Thank you..! ! 😃

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