An Useless Trade Poem by Michelle Melody

An Useless Trade

Rating: 3.0


The words
like waves on
deserted beaches
who knows
whom our poetry reaches...

Friday, January 16, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Raubenheimer 20 January 2009

This lovely thought, so simply framed with its effortless rhyme and beat like waves, is so pleasing to me. You forget this is true. Who knows where a poem goes?

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Jerry Hughes 29 November 2009

...... your words reached me Michelle, thank you. Warmly, Jerry

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Laurie Hill 01 August 2009

A lovely thought, written so very well...........

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Sonya Florentino 27 January 2009

it does reach people who are looking for them Michelle. Love your poem.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 January 2009

Well it reaches to hearts and souls, some say. I think its sort of give and take which takes too much from us but give a little.... Beautiful and thought provoking poem Michelle, very compact as well........10/10. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Rukmani Krishna 21 January 2009

Its really beautiful melody. Do keep writing! ! !

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