An Offering Poem by indira babbellapati
An Offering
this life is yours
so is the pain
and laughter
loss and gain
and all the binaries
that come with the package
the rich tapestry
you designed
to enrich my self
by living it and accepting it
all that i offer
back to you
at your feet!
Crisp, tightly woven structure is ostensibly a natural penchant for you, young lady, and it goes a long way in providing your audiece with a read they can smoothly digest and read again...As always, Indira...Very Well Done! ~FjR~
Beautiful offering indeed. Nice submission.............................Regards, Pranab k c
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4/30/2024 6:02:16 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Woven nicely.The thought and the words are crafted wonderfully.