An Ode To Silence Poem by Sheena Datta

There's genuine music in your poem from the way you construct these parallel stanzas. You exert just enough control to make the pattern work as a series of musical phrases. From my point of view you have found a better way to make word music than using tired old rhymes. I write unrhymed sonnets! Your poem doesn't try to give a dict'y definition of silence (GOOD MOVE!) but rather conveys its impression through imagery, and that's what real poetry does in our modern age.

Wonderful! ! ! Loved the piece.

Silence of times demands one to stop and think about the value of silence! Nice write :)

nicely written...keep it up