In late afternoon and before the night
I played the lessons in music awhile
Forced my mind to fancy the beautiful
Create a rhythm of fingers and strings
I changed for the walk when I felt
In my tight shirts with a wire hanging
From my ear to the FM to listen songs
The voice of the girl that spoke as if
To me alone converged the universe
Followed a man who was driving a cart
His child in amusement for the evening
Green patch behind the bars antelopes
Encaged for view of the passers by
Houses were lit with open doors
As I tiresomely to my place back
What stories shall be in the streets here
Some love and music when cars prepare
For the evening race in this beautiful town
25/4/2009
wowwwww Sadiq with that girl beside me-- If I in your place would have called it 'An evening in Paris' -10 anjali
so spectacular..wow im speechless..another great write my friend
music can make the sad heart into a happy one..music can change the mood of an individual..i think this poem is a story of a fiesta? or A SERENADE OR A STAGE SHOW PRESENTATION? ..the presentation is very good..it makes the readers think what's inside the poem...naizz
beautiful..........laid back sadiq watching the city move by..........superb write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hi SuK..aakum you are a very feeling person...like all poets great lines an observant eyes cheers