An Electrical Engineer's Proposal Poem by savita hari shankar

An Electrical Engineer's Proposal

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Hey Darling(ton) pair
You are a switch who turns me 'on'
Your sight is a lightning bolt that causes
'transients'in my nerve line;
You are my step up transformer-
You boost my spirit;
You are my power system-
you empower me;
You are my particle accelerator-
you accelerate my heart beat;
You have triggered an avalanche breakdown
in my heart;
I am a superconductor of love
Are you at least a semi conductor? ?

Saturday, January 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is dedicated to my best friend. I wrote this poem in my Electronics class-to give an idea to my best friend of how she should propose her love to her geek secret love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 03 January 2015

The piece appears funny but makes a lot of sense. I like the articulation and insight of the poem as it captured the convictions of the Engineer. The beauty of poetry is in the articulation and conviction. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Savita Hari Shankar 26 December 2015

Thank you so much

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