An Adorable Flame Poem by Afzal Juneja

An Adorable Flame

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I see you in my dreams,
I see you in my book,
Ohh my,
I can feel you, in every single look.
.
The day we first met,
Since then, your thoughts are ruthlessly riding my head,
And I know, I am in mess,
But, i feels so great.
Is it insane?
Or is it mundane?
Because theres something burning inside my heart,
And it's wildly reflecting on my brain.
God, this feeling is really hard to explain,
But I call it as,
An adorable flame.
.
.
-A.Juneja.

Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: insanity,lonely,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Deep passionate feeling written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Afzal and do remain enriched.

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Rajnish Manga 03 July 2017

An adorable poem with an exquisite expression of a lover's passion. Thanks for sharing. The day we first met, Since then, your thoughts are ruthlessly riding my head, .......Because theres something burning inside my heart,

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 July 2017

I see you in my dreams, I see you in my book, Ohh my, I can feel you, in every single look. theres something burning inside my heart, adorable flame. These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations A very good poem. Thank you dear poet.. tony

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Afzal Juneja 03 July 2017

Thanks DR

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Souren Mondal 19 November 2015

Yes Afzal.. Love can be really intense.. Thanks for sharing..

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M Asim Nehal 19 November 2015

Nice poem on love...I liked it.

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