Amazingly Poem by Lyn Paul

Amazingly

Rating: 4.5


Just in one beautiful day...
Early this morning an amazing lightning show
Heavy hailstones, but of course no snow
The rain was heavy, it filled the pool
Giant puddles taking the children to school

The enormous clouds, showed different shades of grey
You would think it was the month of May
By mid afternoon you could see the sunshine
At the end of the day the weather was fine

Peculiar how the weather can be
Yet this is our life.
Amazingly




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Saturday, August 4, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: Weather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2018

An amazing expression has been made on weather. I love the lines.....The rain was heavy, it filled the pool / Giant puddles taking the children to school.. Thank you dear madam for sharing this lovely poem on August 4,2012.

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Maria Gonzalez 26 July 2015

Love the symbolism...

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Francie Lynch 19 May 2014

The rain was heavy... school. Love these lines. Good write.

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Owain Glyn 14 April 2013

The rain certainly can't bring you down!

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Shalyn Stachmus 01 September 2012

Awesome. You've painted a perfect picture for me. Thank you. :) I just love it when it rains.

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