## Am Stuck [senryu] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

## Am Stuck [senryu]

Rating: 4.1


if you miss me dear
look into the moon for me
have stuck myself there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 04 June 2009

Yes Samanyan - you need to wave at all of at PH...nice piece

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Sandra Martyres 04 June 2009

Yes Samanyan - you need to wave at all of at PH...nice piece

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Joseph Poewhit 04 June 2009

That, s one big spotlight

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Louis Rams 04 June 2009

i looked at the moon, and what did i see good ole sam looking down at me.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 June 2009

Missing a dear by a miss, who has to look up for him in the moon, is welll said in a few words.

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Smiley Hooker 17 June 2009

You're very funny, Sam! Don't you know I'm a friend to the Moon? Say 'hi' for me, okay? very nice! : -)

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Chitra - 15 June 2009

an indelible mark of love on the silver orb

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A senryu with humor! Who is going to unstick you? Maybe the sun will will have to come closer to melt the glue. 10 Karin Anderson

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C. P. Sharma 10 June 2009

Beautifully stuck. CP

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C. P. Sharma 10 June 2009

Beautifully stuck. CP

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