Am I A Your Rag Poem by Spirit Litter

Am I A Your Rag

Rating: 5.0


What is wrong with you people
Why do you have to keep talking to me
Can you not see that I am doing my own thing
When you are heard I am unclear
Must this go on for so long
Are your walls my home
Doesn't anything you do go right
Won't you just stop
I'm not your heart's mop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Great poem. Short and it has a good point that was made. Great Job

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Marvin Brato 22 May 2008

Doing our own thing, is a right not a privilege! A 10.

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~ Jon London ~ 06 May 2008

Lots of emotion, I Like this... (not your hearts mop) great line.. great poem best wishes Jon

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