Alone (Part 2) Poem by Laura Rodriguez

Alone (Part 2)

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The never ending ocean of sadness is here,
it caught me when I was off guard.
I feel like crying,
I never want to stop crying.
My chest is thight,
I can't feel my heartbeat.
What have you done to me?
I only feel pain in my chest.
There's no one here to protect me.
I'm alone.
No one around me.
No one wants me.
No one loves me.
I'm alone.
Everyone leaves me
forgotten, abonded,
stranded, alone.
No one remembers me...
I'm alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Woods 31 December 2009

I feel the sorrow of this poet. what else can I say?

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Heavy duty poem... Read my poem...ALL ALONE....! And i'm sure u will write alone(part 3) after reading it...lol

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Meggie Gultiano 25 December 2009

a very touching write.....

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