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Alone on Sea


Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
Alone i may not survive

Alone i look out the sea
Alone i wake up on the sea
Alone i seek out for help
Alone i may not survive

Alone i eat my dry food
Alone i drink the salty water
Alone i sit in the cold
Alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i stare at the storm
Alone, yes, alone i live on the sea
Alone, yes, alone i wait for the rescue boat
Alone, yes, alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i pray to be safe
Alone, yes, alone i call out for help
Alone, yes, alone i get on the boat
Alone, yes, alone i was rescued

Alone, yes, alone i lived on sea for months
Alone, yes, alone i walk ashore unaided
Alone, yes, alone i continue to hold the
Guinness World Record for survival at sea

Submitted: Tuesday, April 25, 2006
Edited: Monday, July 19, 2010

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  • Rookie Negarin 1401 (9/17/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    love poem..i feel sincerity with it...sea..alone...i live near the sea..nice feeling (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (7/28/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    Alone I will walk
    on my last mile....
    nicely written it reminded me of a movie of Tom Hanks.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kevin Russell (4/12/2012 8:04:00 PM)

    I loved this poem it reminds me of a time my friends and I were stuck in Nantucket Sound when we were too young to be out on a sailboat by ourselves. Theres some great original poetry on this website as well http: //www.sharingpoetry.com/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessie Peter (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)

    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessie Peter (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)

    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (8/24/2009 6:59:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem with a flow like a song...with surprise in the end..well engraved into experience of survival and loneliness. thanks for sharing!
    Yelena M. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zogam Mi (8/7/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    that was so great and so meaningful. let it be keep it! i feel like the poem some time. U are doing well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 154 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (1/22/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    wonderful piece of poignace life when reeked by lone pain holding the last end of sraw drownig, yet tear gleans slowly in the eyes as embracing the death slowly in the midst of sea, the eloquience ingenious by the imagery, wellpenned,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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