Alone Poem by dennis f. rigdon jr.

Alone

Rating: 5.0


My soul is in pain and its driving me really insane. My heart has nothing to gain, but pure untouched pain and my heart is slowly being slain.
I was willing to give it a try, but it just came back and spit me in my eye.im crying as I write I wont lie I see no more light.just the cold
darkness of the night's.I guess I’ll be alright to be alone to never have someone I can call my own. I have been done wrong be4, but I wont lie this hurt worse then any other time.it would be the same if I slowly was going blind I cant keep her out my mind.im in a real bind its like I have
Been forgotten in time. I guess in the end all that will stay is a dime and the ambition to get paid....................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2009

Been forgotten in time. I guess in the end all that will stay is a dime and the ambition to get paid.................... situation doesnot remain same for all times..you must not loose hope and there is always bright shine at theend of tunnel......lovely write....10 read mine hope against hope...butterflies around.... anywhere...

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Surya . 29 September 2009

nice try to express intense fell.votd10 surya

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Surya . 29 September 2009

nice try to express intense fell.votd10 surya

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Francesca Johnson 17 August 2009

Dennis, this could be a worthy poem if it was arranged in a way that people could read it more easily and without the text-speak. But keep posting..... Fran xx

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