Alone Poem by clayton young

Alone

Rating: 3.3


Broken promises, Shattered dreams,
Dead emotion, Heartless uncaring devotion,
All thrown in my face.

Salty tears drawn from useless fears.
Piercing screams an unfilled seems,
It’s destroying me.

Remember the game? No I swear it’s not that same..
The score, no that’s not right

Raging crimes in the night, monsters and
Demons run in fright. And yes,
I know I’m right.

Empty promises and empty hearts,
Broken bones and angry Tones…
we are all alone

Claytony J. Young

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coreena Lindquist 01 December 2009

i liked it! ! very creative at the words chosen!

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Empty promises and empty hearts, Broken bones and angry Tones… we are all alone.... barentruth and fine write... beautifully descripted... well done reada mine 'You go all alone'

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Rose MaryB. 05 May 2009

..your not that alone buddy.. im here! lol jp but man love the creativity with the words like 'dead emotion' i like it

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