Alone Poem by Racheal LaClair

Alone

Rating: 5.0


Do you hear me?
Do you see me?
Do you care?

When I open up to you,
you shut me out, ignoring the signs
of lonliness.

When I up-do my physical apperance
you tear me down, ignoring the signs
of lonliness.

Do you care
that I am alone?

Do you care..

Do you care
that I need you, to care for, to love, to be loved.

Do you care
that I am alone?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Escape 14 June 2007

Touching and very true... i vote 10.

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Suzan Gumush 29 December 2006

A touching verse. Loved it. best wishes suzan give you ten

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Racheal LaClair

Racheal LaClair

Topeka, Kansas
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