You have stolen my 'todays', yet you shan't steal my tomorrow-
Thought upon your deceitful ruse surely hastens sorrow!
Nary shall there be, for you, a proper penance,
Somehow though, you must come to truth's acceptance!
The only way to take leave of your deceit-
Is to allow for my truth to defeat,
All the Demons and Ghosts
Responsible for your shame, the most!
For if but only, our children's posterity
You owe, at the least, your honesty!
Without such, your downfall you have surely brought,
As is, to tell the truth, is what you ought!
They say: 'the truth shall set you free'-at least you, it shall keep-
Otherwise choice made, causes my heart's weep!
3 August 2008
Our tomorrow is secured on the platform of truth. Great job. I like it
An awesome poem and it is having good thoughts.
I wish I could write a similar poem myself. The following lines, in particular, steal the show The only way to take leave of your deceit- Is to allow for my truth to defeat, All the Demons and Ghosts Responsible for your shame, the most!
Your strength is powerful being able to continue you on with your tomorrows. Thank You
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is a nice poem and an enjoyable read good job