All that I've been given
Is all that I am
I am no more than
What I am
Life has been a tease
All I've done is try to please
Still I ask for nothing
Nothing do I want
All I need is a magic wand
To take me out of what I'm in
I don't want to share their sins
All that I am
is who I be
No one ever made me!
That is a lovely write, wise and true, i agree with Scott, but it is hard to do because we are what we are due to a melange of influences and inherent aspects that mould us deeply. thank you for that beautiful piece. nermin
All I need is a magic wand, great line, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,9
Magic phrase: 'I Am That I Am'. Appears as if you might have a wand; -) ! Lovely, sublime. -R.
This Has Insprired Me In Some Unknown way of which im not sure! ! .. Really Gets in to What poems are all about.. i love your style.. Made me think about using different styles in my own writing. Well written.. Like the majority or all your poems :) Original i feel =] x Kind Regards.. Alii x
intense poem.. a flow of powerful emotions.. the magic wand reminds me of harry potter.. but the situation is different here.. it's as if u r drown metaphorically and the wand would be the boat or something like that...no one beside u, , it's only u there...very touching poem...thanks
I LIKe THIS POEm MayBE u FEEL this WAy Or NOt BUt I Do FEEL LIKE THHIS SomEtIMES GOOD TO No SOme ONE ELSE DoES SO to
yah thou no one is excuse to any mistake others do... still we remain what we are..... i agree.. we want to stand to our own principle, even it hurts other... the most important things is we are strong enough to face any adversities in life... thank you for you poem...you heal the world.. a 10 point
There is everything in nothingness, deep thought... thanks for sharing 10
yeahhhh... you're what you are.. and be and stayed that way.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh contraire young lady you have been shaped and formed since birth. But, you are who you are and that can only be changed by you. I enjoyed the read, what a great job. May peace and joy fill your heart. Scott