A Man Of Many Fashions Poem by suzan gumush

A Man Of Many Fashions

Rating: 5.0


Comes a knock on my door
I open it......
Dressed inside a suit
He stands tall
A clean shaven face appears.....
No thank you not today
Shuts the front door
Comes a knock on my door
I open it.....
Wearing earrings
And a shaven head
Dressed in leather trousers....
No thank you not today
Comes a knock on my door
I open it.....
Comes dressed in jeans
A T shirt
Spelt with words
I'd rather not mention.....
No thank you not today
Comes a knock on my door
I open it.....
He stands naked
That's when I do fall
I'm too shocked for words!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 13 October 2006

'Kick over the traces'. And it's very hard to trace this man?

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Brian Dorn 18 November 2006

Interesting write, Suzan... different, but well suited. Good stuff! Brian

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Kristoffer Pedersen 21 November 2006

Why all the fashion when you don't need any clothes at all. Love it. Thanks for your comment about my poem. Kristoffer

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Michael Meddings 04 December 2006

a cleverly worded and a cheekily bouyant text that hold the reader enthralled until the last when the poet is enthralled well done rgds mike

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Zen Bojczuk 09 January 2007

Love it. I didn't expect that last line.

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 January 2009

I am shocked as well. Suzan, shame on you. A well constructed writing. A wonderful tale. Great creativity. Sometimes, the simplest things make the best reads. Congratulations! A winner! GW62

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C H Sund 13 October 2008

Too often, poems take such a dark route...it is fun to just let the laugh out once in a while! Good One.

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Michael Shaffer 06 September 2008

Love this poem. Read it over several times, It draws you to the end, knowing there is a 'punch line' coming.

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Barry Van Allen 26 January 2008

Suzan, I can understand most any man falling for that fashion, Yet again... you have surprised me. B.V.A.

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okeydokey #3 10 January 2008

...i am a man of many fashions...myself...just kidding...this is a very witty poem...

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