All Out Of Love Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

All Out Of Love

Rating: 5.0


To say without saying
'I'm all out of love',
you could call
that! part of your lover
'love',
and leave lying about the house
Shakespeare's CLI -
said either 'I' or 'one',
it doesn't matter,
but very soon you will be the latter.

All Out Of Love
Saturday, May 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: couple,lost love,love,one,william shakespeare
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
CLI
Love is too young to know what conscience is,
Yet who knows not conscience is born of love?
Then, gentle cheater, urge not my amiss,
Lest guilty of my faults thy sweet self prove;
For, thou betraying me, I do betray
My nobler part to my gross body's treason.
My soul doth tell my body that he may
Triumph in love—flesh stays no father reason,
But, rising at thy name, doth point out thee
As his triumphant prize—proud of this pride,
He is contented thy poor drudge to be,
To stand in thy affairs, fall by thy side.
  No want of conscience hold it that I call
  Her "love" for whose dear love I rise and fall.
23.5.20
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 28 May 2020

Another sonnet from left field by Shakespeare, to which you bring your unique interpretation. This is one of his more obscure sonnets I find.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

Shakespeare's CLI wonderfully clarifies love about lover'. I'm all out of love', it seems to be and amazing phrase. This has deeper meaning. You have brilliantly penned this poem.10

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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