Alive (Senryu) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Alive (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


our solar plexus
focal of Light's energy
searching connection

Friday, August 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: energy,human being
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2018

This is a beautiful Senryu on solar energy and connection of human being with it. Beautiful and meaningful.

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Daniel Brick 15 October 2014

ALIVE is the right title for this poem which focuses on one of the chakras, I believe it is the Heart Chakra, at the center of the subtle body. Your poem shows light streaming in and then going out in search of a connection, which could be a higher stage of spiritual enlightenment or a terrestrial partner. Either way something sacred is occurring, and both options are open.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 September 2014

It's such a meaningful poem, Alas! neither I can explain it completely nor I can honestly comment. I am already charged of blasphemy and unsuitable comments several times.

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