Alankar(Decor)-228 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor)-228

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Their Hearty Love (Mandakranta)

Mandakranta (lady slowly approaching) is referred to as a 'slow stepper'
This Sanskrit stanzaic form is often a poem of love and spirituality.

The defining features of the Mandakranta are:
stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains.
metric, all lines strictly carry the same heavy and light metric pattern
which is established by the first line (this is language specific) .

In English, it is easier to simply consider the verse syllabic,17 syllables per line.
unrhymed and composed with caesura, which appears twice, once after the 4th syllable
and again after the 9th or 10th syllable.


Their Hearty Love (Mandakranta)

She can not walk fast...with crutches she limps... but her heart can run love-fast
Oh, he has no eyes...can not see, so sad... but his heart can feel her love
Waiting for the bus, exchanging fond words, their hearts board the ship of love
Smooth they sail they sail, with dreams for good life...wish them good luck for ever

Thursday, November 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

Features of Mandakranta are definitely amazing and nice. Ancient Sanskrit poems are decorated with literary ornaments and these give nice feeling on reading. This is very thoughtful poem definitely.10

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