Every night I must give up to
the next day
Grow tired, retreat and fade away
My heart calling out for more time
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A wonderful presentation concerning those hazy moments before sleep. A really enjoyable poem, well done. Best wishes, Andrew
a routine affair has been made made in to an exciting thing.powerfull write.posted 10 for u surya
How perfectly you have written of an every day/night occurance....This may be 'Tailor Made' but I will never feel the same when turning off the light after reading this. For me it is brillant........mm. :)
Tailor - this has such a smooth beautiful transition from waking to sleep. I'm jealous as well. -cali-
'Full forward hurl' is terrific Tailor - as is the rest of this piece of art. Letting time slip away - forever - is tough. And we let it go by losing control! And yet we have to be 'fixed' each night! Stunning poetry carrying so much in so few words.
In night comes fantasy and one must release reality to grasp their fleeting dreams...this is sometimes hard to do..it seems you know this well. I love your imagery. I must say...Wow! This was an easy read to get lost in and I did. That's good poetry. Thanks for the great read. : o) bobbie
Hi Taylor. This is a headlong cavort amidst the dying cares of today and the unborn woes of tomorrow; as though 'better the devil we know'. Full of wit and movement and shot through with a sense of realisation of mortality. One to be read and reread savouring nuance with each fall we take into the arms of Morpheus. A very good read. J
Wonderful write of that blurry connection between the finished day, sleep, and what the future holds, and much more besides...
And you will just rise again into a new day Fine poem....Loved the flow TO
Tailor...I'm a shift worker...so my days and nights run together...unfortunately, some days, I don't know which end is up! ! Lovely poem...sounds like you probably don't sleep much... Hugs, Dee
You describe lyrically that tantalizing place between wakefulness and sleep... such an exquisite nightly struggle... Enjoyed this very much. Love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Tailor, the saying goes 'good things come in small packages'. This holds true for your most elegant poem 'Again'. I love the feel and the flow of this poem, warm, comforting, soothing. Thankyou Tailor Melvina
Tailor...A finely Eloquent Write...Smooth Fluxion....tight, crisp construction...solid penning''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr
Tailor, I like this one so much I am going to write my own version. It is part of the thought process of everyone who has lived. Jim