Advice`s Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Advice`s

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you are accepting
taking to heart
you are sorting

it as objects
you sometimes reject
given for free

for money
and the smile
sincere, and not

they are helping
they are encouraging
and they harm,

if not hit,
it are exposing
to ridicule

willingly heard out
given by everyone
met all along the way

and the most we have
'doctors'...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 19 May 2009

Very good poem. I like not only contents, but and alone the record. Aesthetic and elegant. :)

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