Advertisement Poem by Bharati Diggikar

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Rating: 4.5


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For Sale:
This nomad house,
under temporary detention.
Shortcomings? only one!
Footprints of harsh sun
All over the pavilion.

Some instructions:
Stark empty mind? Hark! Do not stay.
And still if you do, sorcery it will play
Don't ever fathom the underground way
Hidden treasure there? Can't really say!

For Sale:
This nomad house,
With sturdy bedrock
With sentimental windows
And a crazy rooftop.

-Bharati..

Friday, November 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: personality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Does a nomad have a house? (‘House' attaches so level of permanence with it, no?) Or does the poet speak of her own state of mind? I respect the freedom of the poet to contradict herself, butI could not connect with the poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 December 2020

For Sale: This nomad house, With sturdy bedrock With sentimental windows And a crazy rooftop. interesting poem. tony

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Bharati Diggikar 28 November 2020

Thank you dear all.Nomad house is a self-contradiction,embedded in the persona of artist.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2020

For Sale: This nomad house, With sturdy bedrock With sentimental windows And a crazy rooftop./// it's expressive about the nomad life

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 November 2020

A well authored poem........... Truly impressive.....5 stars*****

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