Admitting Poem by A. H. Zedan

Admitting

Rating: 5.0


I want to admit
That I have loved you from the first sight
I want to admit
That I do think about you day and night


I want to admit
That I am ready to fight the whole world for your sake
I want to admit
That I will wait for you no matter how long that will take

Yes, I love you so very much
Yes, I think of you day and night
I do not care if that is wrong
And I do not want to make it right


Please do not talk about any difference
Please forget about the long distance
For your eyes I would sacrifice my soul
For your smile I would give my all


I would give up the love,
If my heart beats were not for you
And if you were not the one I live for,
I would give up my life too


I will always love you
I will always try
Cause' no goal is too distant
And no star is too high'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Li Away 07 July 2006

well, i iloved the part that says; i don't care if that is wrong and i don't want to make it right it's so sweet and well put but it's still not wrong at least in my eyes.

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Nick Percowycz 18 June 2006

Love is a beautiful thing! And A H Zedan has just made it more beautiful! Excellent! 10.

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Declan McHenry 18 June 2006

A brave sentiment, well expressed. Let the heart guide.

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