Addiction Poem by Jhon Doe

Addiction

Rating: 5.0


I know it’s there
and it won’t go away
it’s been there so long
I thought it was here to stay

I can hear it
softly screaming my name
begging me to return
to my old game

I can feel it
pulling me in it’s direction
and making me sick
like some horrible infection

I tried to kick it back
and keep it away
but I know it’s still there
watching, waiting, every single day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shutter Queen 29 July 2008

Nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You rocked this one dude! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Niky M 29 June 2008

forget the past, begin with the new very nicely written =] Niky~

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~ Jon London ~ 09 June 2008

Nicely penned....the addiction of the devils candy

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Ron Flowers 08 June 2008

John, it seems to me you have much to say.

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