Accident Poem by dances inpuddles

Accident

Rating: 5.0


I, see you
Sitting softly.
Upon that stone cold stair.

I, feel the hurt inside you.
My kisses, they play,
Dance, inhale your hair.

I am not far away from you.
I wish that you could know.
There is a life beyond these walls,
So sweet
One day you'll know.

Too many questions
Left unanswered.
Too many cwtches
Left that I need.

You told me you would wait for me.
So why did I have to leave?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun William Hayes 09 September 2008

Good work, spoilt a little by typo in third stanza, otherwise a novel approach in a concise manner. Like it.

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