About Dama (On How I Wanted Her Before And How I Miss Her Now) Poem by allan macli borges

About Dama (On How I Wanted Her Before And How I Miss Her Now)

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I remember the day when I saw her
In that t-shirt I liked she was wearing
She was too pretty for me – I thought
From the window I’m just staring
She was walking hand in hand
With another man and seeming happy
This girl will be my girlfriend – I said so
It was more than I could imagine

She’s my Dama;
For whom I live and could die
Cause she brings me back to life
I was nothing but whispers in the dark
She healed me from my pale
She’s all I need to get high
When she came into my place
All shone for her grace
She’s the light, she’s the shine
The beauty of the night
Brighter than moonlight
Stronger than sunrise

I’m sorry that we’re apart
I know how it hurts on you
Cause I feel the same pain inside
But when I’m feeling so blue
I remember your smile
So large and shining white
That illuminates my mind
I swear we’ll find a manner
To get us together sooner
Cause although I seem strong
I‘ll carry it no longer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 21 March 2009

This is a truly heartfelt story. A rather interesting story at that. I liked the details and really wanted more of that than the praise of her beauty. Still, I felt the pain of separation. A pain I have known as well. GW62

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Tanya Stanford 22 March 2009

Wow. This is really touching and sounds like it's coming from the heart.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 March 2009

A heartfelt love poem. May you both be together soon and then never be seperated. Best Wishes Naseer

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Chad Robinson 25 March 2009

Could be sold for a song! ! ! ! ! 10 from me.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 04 April 2009

a very good story! nice and gentle!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2010

I swear we’ll find a manner To get us together sooner Cause although I seem strong I‘ll carry it no longer..i wish you will get dama in your life..try eqrnesly...lovely poem....20 read mine....any where..... butterflies around..... from the day one...., , , colour

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 December 2009

All shone for her grace She’s the light, she’s the shine The beauty of the night Brighter than moonlight Stronger than sunrise.....................most passionate, yet poignant too, let the hope be the love tof tomorrow, wionderful write,10/10, . thanks for sharing

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Allan Macli Borges 10 September 2009

From: TaMaRa HaNaRinG *in your eyes I saw my touch healing you, watchful eyes guarding you, (DuBaI.... United Arab Emirates; Female; 40) To: Allan Macli Borges Date Time: 9/10/2009 12: 20: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: facing trobules in commentig..about Dama hi allan..loved this poem and gave me a smile while seeing you in that window saying she will be yours..a warm lovely poem..it touches my heart..womnderful feeling and vesesAbout Dama (on how I wanted her before and how I miss her now)

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Rachel Butler 08 September 2009

Brighter than moonlight Stronger than sunrise Rachel Ann Butler

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2009

But when I’m feeling so blue I remember your smile So large and shining white That illuminates my mind.... it is lovely with sad feeling..this is what life is all about..we may rememeber but for her good and to malign her... ishare your views sompletely....10 read mine innocence regained....mary to marry...miss i miss u

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