A World Full Of Wonders Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
A World Full Of Wonders
I know the joy
That comes from watching
The sunrise
It sends hope
For a new day.
The inner peace we feel
When we walk through a meadow
Of wildflowers
It is like the world
Is paradise.
The beauty of the rainbow
That arches across the sky
After a big storm
It renews the spirit
Of a deserted heart.
The brightness of the orange moon
That turns the night
Into a colorful landscape
It gives a warm embrace
For a peaceful night.
The kiss
Of a cool breeze
On the face and strands of hair
Like a wonderful promise
That everything will be alright.
Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
I will give my vision here I am going to read verse by verse Stanza One: I know the joy That comes from watching The sunrise It sends hope For a new day. This stanza gives me a very very optimistic feel, as soonest as I read " sunrise" , that surplus feeling inside me, nearly at the brim of outbursting. Reminds me of Turner's impressionistic painting.
Still Stanza One: As I said, very optimistic feelings for a brighter new day. The word Hope stands for “better than yesterday”, absolutely. A most fascinating start.
Stanza Two: The inner peace that we feel When we walk through a meadow From wild flowers It is like the world Is it paradise? Simply beautifully worded, upon seeing a meadow, green and fresh are associated here and then the question comes in this stanza " Is this paradise" ? Then comes as " pats-boom! " the feeling of top peace within us, as it is said here in the first sentence. Amazingly rendered
Stanza Three: The beauty of the rainbow That bent through the air After a big storm It renews the mind From an abandoned heart. Such a beautiful sentence, we know the rainbow, in the fortnight that I was in Ghana I saw it twice. Really very beautiful! So too this stanza, it shows finesse in the creation. An abandoned heart? ! Fantastic metaphor.
This is a superb piece.....it pleases me very much....thank u, dear poetess
This is simply an excellent piece.....thank u, dear poetess...
Comments from you, Sylvia Ma'am, Dr Dillip k Sahu, Robert Murray Smith and Mrs Bharati Naik triggered me to write more of my real feelings in words with my limited vocabulary.Sincerely hope you will keep on your boosting with your poetic suggestion. and criticisms.I express again my gratitude to all.
Every stanza reflects your great optimism.All poems of yours and all comments are highly encouraging for person like me..I am not at all a poem writer..I started writing my experience and feelings only recently, during the ongoing pandemic.Totally new to the system
A very excellent expression of nature's beauty with Powerful meaning reflecting your positivity.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/8/2024 10:22:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
1) So many nieces and nephews have their birthday in this month, so today I have taken the opportunity to go online on PH. Dear mrs. Juan Austin, such a heavenly feeling I have got after having read your fascinating words, carefully selected and here we are to enjoy these wonderous lines in five stanzas Indeed having entered your poetic home, I get an entrhalling feel, WOW! What a pure delight to read and keep rereading. A 10++++