A Wish Upon A Star Poem by Alafe Ramat

A Wish Upon A Star

Rating: 4.3


A wish upon a star, so light without a scar, i ploughed behind, though far..., so long within our bar, what light through yonder window breaks? yet amidst the gleeful tarn, i wouldn't take a steer, grinning i bear it , like nothing is wrong, and i will thank that star forever for making our wish come true, reaching out to the sky blue, blessed be that star that gloweth our merge.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 10 July 2012

A strong worded beautiful poem! Well done

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Ramesh Rai 11 July 2012

a beautiful poem. i like it.

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Nurain Ali-balogun 27 July 2012

Beautifully written, very lovely.

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Captain Cur 23 July 2012

Stellar feelings captured in this heartfelt poem. Wonderful write.

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Angelique Neal 21 July 2012

wonderful. nice and beautiful

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 13 July 2012

if m not wrong thats truly from your heart! !

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Micah Ogberhie 13 July 2012

Beautiful wordings...nicely written ..in my opinion every one that makes come true our ardent wish is more than a star... kudos!

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