* A Want In A Minute Poem by Inner Whispers

* A Want In A Minute

Rating: 5.0


Got a walk at a nearby shore
Stared on still waters, alone, I abhor,
That If I want to, I can keep a companion to have
With me in this early setting of sun I wish to lay my eyes with.

For a moment I am dumbfounded
At the scenic beauty of the sun's setting as I waited,
Sitting on a baywalk chair, I found myself
Nostalgic and hopeful, longing to have someone to cuddle at the moment.

Smelling the cool breeze, something confuse my mind
What do I really want?
Ahhh... I know my tormenting wants but my heart is confused,
Can I still trust? Can I still lOve?
If until now, I don't know what I want?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 25 April 2009

Wonderful composition.

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 16 April 2009

a significant write of self comtemplation...well expressed...nice...10

0 0 Reply
James Mclain 16 April 2009

Li Po will tell you about what is found suiting to long alone..in chair of bamboo..to song...nice different insular words you do have...thank you..iip

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success