A Walk Poem by new poet

A Walk

Rating: 4.7


when we talk
as we walk
on the shore
my love for you is sure

lets sit and tell our deepest secrets
i hope that this wont be our regret
I'll tell you how i loved you since the second grade
you'll say that i was there by your side all along
and i'll play our favorite song
I say that all those years being your best friend
were hard, you never saw the trend
the guys walked by never saying hi
they didnt care about you so why didn't you see
I was always there
and now you're here
and i have three words to say
and this is the only way
i love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeeb Alfateh 25 June 2019

I was always there and now you're here and i have three words to say and this is the only way i love you loving expression 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Danny H 15 August 2009

I liked your other poem, you have potential, so i thought id read your other poems. This poem is very passionate, hopeful, and romantic :) Nicecly penned

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Blessing Nanier 05 August 2009

i'm definitely falling inlove with ur poems

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Stephanie Starr 01 August 2009

This is so touching! I wish I could write a love poem like that!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 July 2009

Its like a walk of a lifetime, a walk that fills the warmness of sweet love.Nice writes!

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