A Viceroy In Greenland Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Viceroy In Greenland

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The mould is within you,
Acquire my face,
Bake yourself Oh Clay
Increase your grace.
Life is a fatigue
You may be tired
One thing that is love
Eve has already acquired.
Look at her curves and cuts,
It's a wonderful board to play,
Your hand will be my hand
Just a night and a day,
And a viceroy in Green Land!

Thursday, January 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: man
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Comment on God Said, I Made A Man - Poem by Jose Garcia Villa

God said, "I made a man
Out of clay—
But so bright he, he spun
Himself to brightest Day

Till he was all shining gold,
And oh,
He was lovely to behold!
But in his hands held he a bow

Aimed at me who created
Him. And I said,
‘Wouldst murder me
Who am thy Fountainhead! '

Then spoke he the man of gold:
‘I will not
Murder thee! I do but
Measure thee. Hold

Thy peace.' And this I did.
But I was curious
Of this so regal head.
‘Give thy name! '—‘Sir! Genius.'"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2019

Life is a fatigue/You may be tired/One thing that is love/Eve has already acquired/Look at her curves and cuts, It's a wonderful board to play....I sense a deep spiritual message in this great expression! A sublime piece of work! (10)

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 January 2019

A nice inspiration from a nice poem, one thing, that is love, has no colours, no cast and creed, no nationality, nothing else other than to live and die for a lovely sweetheart.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2019

One thing that is love! ! ! The World needs love than hatred! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 January 2019

and the genius was SIR AKHTAR JAWAD JI OF AZAAD PAKISTAN

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