A Twilight Adieu Poem by Seemeen Khan Yousufzai

A Twilight Adieu

Rating: 4.5


Across the lake,
In the sea of sands
A soothing lazy breeze
Plays with a sandy-hued lock of hair
That has an independent spirit of its own.

Away from the rest of its clan
It dances wildly
Like a sensual gypsy dancer
Its wild freedom
Obstructing the line of vision
Of the intense deep eyes,
That encompasses a lost world within its realm.

Scrutinising the message of nature
Encoded in the ambience
Under the canopy of the firmament
The amber-gold-rayed brown eyes breathe in
The change in the sky as twilight approaches.

And the sun winks at the eyes
Through the clouds
As a final goodbye for the day
And the eyes crinkle at the corners
Lighting up as the sun lights up the sky,
Thus, the silent watchers
Bid each other a sweet adieu.

©Seemeen Khan Yousufzai

A Twilight Adieu
Friday, June 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,nature love,romanticism,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2017

And the sun winks at the eyes Through the clouds As a final goodbye for the day And the eyes crinkle at the corners Lighting up as the sun lights up the sky, beautiful poem and very poetic....... you have the heart of a great poetess and artist... God bless u for this poem.. tony

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Thank you very much for such a wonderful comment and taking the time out to read it. Much indebted.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 June 2017

A nice combination of light, colour and passion. Thanks

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Thank you.

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