A Teardrop Poem by sheelu shibani

A Teardrop

Rating: 5.0


laughing aloud with tears around
crying a lot with tears out
rolling down the cheeks you are found
oh! teardrop what you tell about

made of salt and water you are
like the raindrop tickling us
out always at the right hour
coming slowly without a fuss

all the feeling you have taught
coming all the way from heart
with the brain you have fought
despite all you hit thr right dart

any emotion you are out
oh! teardrop what are you about

Sunday, April 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,happiness,sadness,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vivek Kumar 25 April 2016

what a lovely n impressive poem..! !

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Akhil Raveendran 24 April 2016

good poem.. but you looking sad.. and tear come out...

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 April 2016

Poet's PagePoemsQuotesCommentsStatsSend MessageShare on FacebookShare on Twitter Poems by sheelu shibani: 1 / 2 next poem » A Teardrop - Poem by sheelu shibani laughing aloud with tears around crying a lot with tears out rolling down the cheeks you are found oh! teardrop what you tell about made of salt and water you are like the raindrop tickling us out always at the right hour coming slowly without a fuss all the feeling you have taught coming all the way from heart with the brain you have fought despite all you hit thr right dart any emotion you are out oh! teardrop what are you about Oh sweet..marvellous.. A great poetess you are! ! Your analysis of the teardrop was splendid. How matured have you become at such tender an age. A perfect 10 for this poem. Thanks for the poem. Subhas

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 April 2016

any emotion you are out oh! teardrop what are you about a great poem , lot of imagination to bring the teardrop into poetic sentiments that is very much valuable for the reader........like the poem very much dear poetess Sheelu. tha nk you. pl. write more.......... tony

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