A Story Of Funny Students Poem by Rajaram Ramachandran

A Story Of Funny Students

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In the good old system,
It was the usual custom,
Where teachers lived,
Their students stayed.

The students, beside studies,
Did teachers' household duties,
Be it any work indoor,
Or it was an errand outdoor.

Once, ten students brainless,
Joined a teacher useless,
In a remote village house,
Under the care of his spouse.

They watched one day,
A red hot spoon, the lady
Dropped in a water pool,
For the spoon to cool.

When one of them got fever,
The rest poured cold water,
To cool him down, instead,
Fever raised hot and red.

The ten, once, crossed a river,
And to check up the number,
One stood outside the line,
And the rest formed the line.

The man outside counted nine,
And searched for the tenth one.
Every one did the same, in turn
Found they were short by one.

An old man heard their cry,
To help the fools free from shy,
Asked them to stand in line,
And counted right all the ten.

'A sewing needle, get
Me from the market, '
So ordered the Spouse
Of their master's house.

Four of them went out,
And a needle they bought,
But how it should be carried,
They disputed and argued.

A plantain tree they cut,
At the center pinned it,
And carried the tree home,
With mouth full of foam.

The lady chided them all,
And picked up the needle,
Cursing her ruling stars,
That brought her such fools.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 March 2010

Joyous read narrative style…but one word ‘Gurukula’ system of oldendays now we find in ad of various institutions…history repeats and completes… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 August 2009

In the good old system, It was the usual custom, Where teachers lived, Their students stayed.......... extra ordinary piece of underwritng a poem with true devotion....10 speaks abtancient relationthat existed betweenstudent and teachers lovely one.. read mine no teacher please....school and kids

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Risha : Ahmed 10 July 2007

Sir, a funny poem indeed. You certainly know how to tell a story or a joke. Excellent.

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Raveendran . 13 May 2007

You are a nice story teller, making use of the ballad form...

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Preeti - is here! 26 June 2006

Oh My God, this one completely cracked me up. Humor well captured in this poem! You've got variety. Will definitely read more from your collection of poems :) Preets

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Rajaram Ramachandran

Rajaram Ramachandran

Chennai born, now at Juhu, Mumbai, India
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