A Small Poem To Her(M.S) Poem by Thabo Rasego

A Small Poem To Her(M.S)

Rating: 4.5


Her charisma controls my ultimate emotion i feel
about sense of love!

pulse of passion beat
strongest beats creating a rhythm of love!

Spiritual freedom I endure from her presents teaches I wealth of eternal life of love!

Her tone vibrate the vocal inspirational words of paranormal spell of love!

Hero is not supernatural to feel her aromatic surroundings of her love!
Educational journey is payment I earn from lessons she lecture in my sensational trip of love!

She rewarded I with fruitful blooming factual affection of love!

Wisdom, faith, trust, confidence pulls I to dance with passion of love!

Ms M.S I love loving You.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 02 April 2012

Very good poem! But hey man work on the grammar please.There are too many language/grammatical errors.Otherwise all in all the poem is very good

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Thabo Rasego

Thabo Rasego

Rustenburg, South Africa
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