A Shared World Poem by Lady of the Trees

A Shared World

Rating: 5.0


Under the pine tree we did play,
sister and sister, sharing sunny days,
unmindful of any world but our own.
It was a young world
which we did partake of together.

Now we are worlds apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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Stefanie Fontker 15 July 2011

A sad, but beautiful poem.

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