A Seascape Dream At Dawn Poem by Ananta Madhavan

A Seascape Dream At Dawn

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In that sloth before waking up a dream may come
And vanish without trace, unless its vividness
Is noted on a scrap of paper or saved in cyber-space.

This dawn I dreamt that I was in a car,
High up on a hill, when we began
Slowly descending by the hairpin bends,
In lower gear for safety. At one pause,
I came upon a sudden seascape, vast and endless;
Strong blusters whirled the leaves of swaying trees
And held rain promise. The pitted water surface
Sprang out in myriad little boats; they were like
Fully fashioned naval fleets, forming and re-forming;
Every Instant they appear and exit:
A life, an ego, a birth for mirth and woe
Will vanish into oceanic oblivion
In imagined Time sans history,
Symbols of transience in boundless Eternity.

Sunday, July 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wrote this today,19 July,2015
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 28 July 2015

Love the first stanza, I also wake up and write it down, using a flashlight to see with! Love this line: Symbols of transience in boundless Eternity. Beautiful dream-like quality with gentle rhythms singing in the background. Great poem, Ananta! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 July 2015

Truly, dreams acknowledge life it's mirth and woe.Loved reading the poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 July 2015

Vanish without trace! With the muse of a dream. Nice work.

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