A Sea Of Solitude! Poem by Sandra Feldman

A Sea Of Solitude!

Rating: 5.0


A Straight line to nowhere,
Solitude guides you there
Silence accompanies the traveler
Hoping, to arrive somewhere.

Open your eyes
Gaze at the Sea,
Its blue immensity,
A tear rolls down your eyes
And joins the stillness
In the air,
As hands, emptily flutter
Like Seagulls in despair.

Lonely Traveler, there
Life so short,
So painful,
You have now completed
Your lonely voyage,
To nowhere.

Monday, December 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment,lonely,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yiyan Han 09 December 2020

The year 2020 is tough for every one I think, and by praying to God then we'll see hope. Nice piece with flying stars

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 December 2020

A well crafted poem.... Truly heartfelt.....5 stars *****

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 December 2020

Straight-line is nowhere Everywhere is mixed up the good and bad to survive just Pure good soul feels always solitude wherever it travels........

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 December 2020

Lovely poem. I can feel the loneliness. I thought the tear drop was going to fall in the sea water. What a lonely tear drop in the sea in a lonely poem.

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