A Scenario Of Lull, Before The Storm Poem by ritty patnaik

A Scenario Of Lull, Before The Storm

Rating: 5.0


a scenario,
a perfect beginning,
to endless.
from matter to life.
the scene of happenings,
many and strange.
in a moment it comes,
and in a moment it goes.

with one blink,
the thinking soul,
leaves an idea
of quest and knowledge,

the scene of silence
a dream,
or a state of awakeness
whether of the earth
or the sky?
of sunset, or change of season?
rain washed
or an early morning
of a rainy day.
or the dark night,
of a dark phase.

all have different story,
to tell,
if you think about this
panoramic view!

under the scenic beauties feet,
so many rivers originate,
in hunger they look up
to the sky.

the many colours of rainbow,
is the truth of illusion,
and beauty of truth.

and man,
till yesterday he was,
strong, capable and pragmatic.
today aimless,
destroyed, nature and
also himself.

the scenario is illusive and quiet,
lull before the storm!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 16 July 2009

the many colours of rainbow, is the truth of illusion, and beauty of truth. wow ritty ji thats awesome infact the poem is so fluid that you just rush through the first time...take a breeath and start all over again...beautiful and charming as the scenes u paint...and this qouted triplet is just awesome cheers

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2009

'under the scenic beauties feet, so many rivers originate, in hunger they look up to the sky'... truthful observation...expressed very poetic...i am able to see the real poet the real nature lover in you in this write...10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 17 August 2009

a wonderful poem ma'am... 'the many colours of rainbow, is the truth of illusion, and beauty of truth.' this is an awesome stanza. i just loved it. deep...and absolutely amazing. thank you very much.

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Vaibhav Pandey 28 July 2009

mam, this poem has a great flow....very unique annd creative...10

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Rakesh Bedi 23 July 2009

Ritty, you convinced me through your poem of the lull before the storm! But, what kind of storm do you expect?

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Bob Blackwell 22 July 2009

I loved this poem, the words you have chosen to describe a changing world are beautiful. Bob

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