A Ring Of Stars Poem by Leslie Philibert

A Ring Of Stars

Rating: 4.0


nearing time

a ring of stars told me the future is
the sea that you try to grasp with your
broken hands and the past will not be
changed it is stained with rust and flotsam
as your inside ebbs like a mossed ruin in
the dunes as salted grass fails to grow as
the wind shakes the waves you are alone

Friday, June 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature walks
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
will this be read? I`m not sure...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 24 June 2016

Yes, I read it though i felt it intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 June 2016

Nature! As the wind shakes the waves. Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 24 June 2016

You were wondering if it would be read. It was. It's rather enigmatic. Not sure if I understand it all, but it was fascinating to read.

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