A Raindropp For You Poem by Lee Tran

A Raindropp For You

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Can you smell the rain, crescending
Little drops beaded on your face,
Though I see differently with my own eyes,
A twinkling jewel under gray skies,
Golden light to my heart within,
A kiss in the rain unbroken.

Fast nor slow the tears fall,
Like a soft drip from a creek,
Calmly meandering towards the lake,
A lake of diamonds gleaming under the sun,
You and I hand in hand run,
Together in the rain untouched.

Happiness is only a tear dropp away,
This is ours for the taken, cherish the moment,
I promise you love for my life,
Please stay with me under the mists,
Kiss me with your precious lips,
As we dance in the rain under sunny skies...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Reif 02 November 2005

I too think that's a beautiful metaphor. A real love poem, Lee, original, I think. A couple very small things: Is 'crescending' correct? And the idiom is, 'our for the takING'. Nice writing!

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