A Quick Distraction Poem by Danzen D...

A Quick Distraction



Alone, I watched
my pen
scratching words,

making lines.
Ideas
shine out through.

Can't stop
my hand
from moving.

Too many things
to write,
time is short.

Until I saw
a bird
gliding free.

A tiny sparrow,
brown,
and cute.

It set on
a tree,
a snake beside.

I jerked,
sigh...
poor sparrow..

I write again...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nashy Lamen 15 September 2009

GOOD ONE! hahaha...

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Julia Pascual 12 September 2009

'poor sparrow'? i don't know why... but i can imagine you saying that in a sarcastic way... =)

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Lorena Cruz 12 September 2009

sometimes there are things which catches our eyes but at the same moment its taken away from our reach.. But with this distraction we have to move on and continue writting our story..

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