A Promise Poem by Zulfiqar Ali Bhatti

A Promise

Rating: 4.5


O land of love and peace!
The devils try to forcibly fleece
Your identity from the globe,
Knowing not your sons on probe
Will never let them do
And shed their blood for you!
Will send them to hell soon
And make you free of every goon.

Thursday, May 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: patriotism
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 May 2016

Knowing not your sons on probe Will never let them do And shed their blood for you! - - - such a great poem on patriotism...... shed the last drop of blood for the mother land.... thank you very much. tony Happy to send u a comment nd gave u a big 10. Would u read my poem “if you die before me” if you hve time would you comment and vote. I just did it for you.. Voting is important in this website. thank you. tony God bless you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 May 2016

Knowing not your sons on probe Will never let them do And shed their blood for you! - - - such a great poem on patriotism...... shed the last drop of blood for the mother land.... thank you very much. tony

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Nosheen Irfan 27 May 2016

Spirit of patriotism expressed beautifully. Thanks for sharing.

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