A Promise Poem by Rambling Dreamer

A Promise



When you're stuck on the lonely dark road and no one in view,
Just always remember that i'm the light eagerly waiting to be found by you.
And after all that we have been through,
All i can wish i u know by now my feelings are true.

The climb we're on is steep n tough,
But i assure i'll be your strongest support,
I'll be your warmth n always shelter you,
Like your favorite and secure coat.

You may now wonder what I'll ask in return,
Well its your trust i want to earn.
and something that's simply pricless,
i want to hear those three magic words that will be sealed with a kiss!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
another old poem from the old account :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aswath Raman 23 August 2013

This is a nice romantic poem Nikita! A powerful flow of passion. But I feel you need to reframw the middle four lines.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 August 2013

A wistful poem with lovely super rhymin! Pls do read my horses poem. Tnx

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