A Prayer Of Proclamation.... Poem by Geoff Warden
A Prayer Of Proclamation....
My dearest and closest friend,
So many is a time you and I
Talked upon the whispered winds
And you have silently listened
To my thoughts
To my hopes
To my dreams
Today I sit with many under
The fair skies, with tears in my eyes
As I watch the way u teach again
of the solidity of how two or more
open the clouding doors
and that all being put aside
In the midst u shall hide
My Dear Jesus
Not long in the past did I ask
that there could be a grouping of
those who would believe in truth
and stand in doors of hell
to voice the victory of the defeat
of that which defies the ways
of the truth
of the light
that of you.....
today that prayer will be answered....
Beautiful and heartfelt Geoff! The truth...the light...that of you! Wonderfully said!
Definitely from the heart Geoff and here for all to see, a wonderful powerful prayer reaching out to the Holy Saviour and talking to him as we all should do. You have a wonderful realtionship going on with the Lord Geoff. Thanks for your support on this First Day of Worship here on Poemhunter.--Melvina--
This might be better served if line 2 read with...'so many's the time' or ' so many is a time' when.... combined with line 12's correction of the singular open with a insertion of a period at the end of that sentence. Other than that, this is a beautiful offering. GWG
Sir Geoff of The Word and The Way...A W E S O M E....P E N N I N G! Perhaps your very best work to date, my friend...So good to see you on my visit to Poemtown this friday evening...And i want to say: Thank You, for your recent reads & comments...a loyal & lifetime friend in true you be, indeed...I am trying to juggle business & this site...But, thus far...not so well...Been tossin' pieces onto the posting line here & there...but my heart & mind are no longer zoned in as they once were....Anyway...keep in touch, Oh Squire of Sacred Scriptings... ~ ~ ~
Sir Geoff of The Word and The Way...A W E S O M E....P E N N I N G! Perhaps your very best work to date, my friend...So good to see you on my visit to Poemtown this friday evening...And i want to say: Thank You, for your recent reads & comments...a loyal & lifetime friend in true you be, indeed...I am trying to juggle business & this site...But, thus far...not so well...Been tossin' pieces onto the posting line here & there...but my heart & mind are no longer zoned in as they once were....Anyway...keep in touch, Oh Squire of Sacred Scriptings... ~ ~ ~
Thank you for sharing the Prayer, the Blessings, the Poem.
What a wonderful prayer to write (I am sure) ...and to Read (makes the reader feel blessed) Thanx so much. It is always nice to read prayer but it becomes much better when you can be blessed by it...I feel your conviction and the happiness in your voice (Your written voice) and I will now go back and pray this prayer. Thank You Geoff for sharin.....10/ten. Take care of U =Shelley=
Here I was serving up grammatical guru revisions, forgetting all the while that my critique should have read.... an insertion instead. Oh, pshaw, tsk, tsk. Shame on me for six weeks! But no snow, this is truly a dandy corker. You, my most astute scribe, are poetically progressing along at a fast clip. Maintain your impressive and bodacious work. Your fellow Londoner, GWG
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is beautiful and soulful, Geoff. Perfect for a Sunday morning. You speak so eloquently those words that we all pray in our own hearts and souls. Thanks for sharing it so selflessly. Linda xx