**a Pencil Form Daddy! ** Poem by Fathmath Sana

**a Pencil Form Daddy! **

Rating: 5.0


I have a pencil,
My daddy gave it,
He brought it from the council,
Where he works and his life is fit.

The pencil has a dark lead,
It's length is long,
I can wirte with it, and read,
A beautiful song!

At the end of it, it has a rubber,
and rhe pencil is made, from wood,
As I write, 'Grubber, grubber, ''
And draw a crocodile, looking at a meal, good!

This pencil is easy,
And it had made me fall in love,
When i drew a chich and hot looking boy with hair greasy,
And when it was done, My Dad's Nice Pencil, had shown the proof!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 30 July 2009

excellent composition.gift of a pencil is metaphorical. to draw, to learn and to aspire. reach your dreams. a treasured gift.written in a lighter vein, it has hidden meanings. well crafted poem. in the beginning i felt i was reading a limerick. 10 MAMTA

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Saadat Tahir 28 July 2009

on the face of it the poem is great... but i'm thouroughly confused...there is more toit then meets the eye any way nice poem cheers

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nd when it was done, My Dad's Nice Pencil, had shown the proof! ...... after all it is gift from dad and every child preserves it as holy gift.... very good write.....10 read mine also o, mother, papa do u know? and papa you too? u will appricaite its reation.

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Shashendra Amalshan 21 May 2009

this one is ssoooooo very cute..thanks....

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

the poem speaks for itself well penned and a great tribute -mel

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