~! ! *~a Path That I'V Chosen~*! ! ~ Poem by dana XxX
~! ! *~a Path That I'V Chosen~*! ! ~
I've chosen a way to go
before I really knew...
That I can't go back
even if I wanted to...
it's hard to live with my decision
cause I keep blaming myself till now...
and I don't know how but I lost my vision
and that's why I didn't see what I really want.. (And it's you!)
but recently I started to realize
that I've made a mistake...
and now I just want to apologize
and get back with you no matter what it takes... (From me)
when I decided to live without you
I was so blind to not see the true
I'm so mad because I screw...(So bad!)
but if you give me another chance
I'll can make it up to you! ..
I've said what I've got so are you ready
to forget what I've done
just keep smiling and be happy
I promise you that I'll never leave you again..(No not again!)
at the end I knew that it was true
I can't go back from the way I've chosen
but i can make it a great path to keep going to
by not falling in the same mistakes
~and just have faith~! ! !
yes u have to check for the grammar....but it is good....u can post it at songwritingfever.com....and u can post any song there..where music coposers are looking for words to compose music for.....great piece dear....keep writing.
hey Dana.... soeday we will sing this song hmmmmmm nice song it is..10
this song is a good one..meaningful...and i congratulate you for writing a poem in a song..good job..grace
a good song indeed...liked it...well written poem..appreciate you..10++++
love befuddles by mistake love resurrects by resilience as knowing the mistake, yet passionate, write,10+++, keep on writing, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/1/2024 1:43:02 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Dana it's a good start but hope you watch out more for English grammars