~together***forever***in My Heart~ Poem by dana XxX

~together***forever***in My Heart~

Rating: 5.0


you and me..
how couldnt you see..
that we are meant to be..

~together~

no matter where you are...
or even how far..
i feel your brightness like a shining star...

~forever~

your so special to me you cant be replace..
im so glad that i have an amazing grace..
you were and still and will stay in your place..

~in my heart~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasser Koor 02 June 2009

Wow great poem dear what a wonderful writing and feeling i touched in your poem. nice poem dear well-done

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Alen Alexander 11 June 2009

liked the rhyme scheme :) kinda like a small song, nice!

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

a beautiful expression of together forever in your heart..nicely penned..grace

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 June 2009

yet a fantastic appeal by the, , together....for ever, , , reasoning truth of love, when sharing blue being juxtaposed, this a passionate, i like too,10++, thanks for sharing

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Afzal Shauq 14 June 2009

wow sooo romantic and swetly done this poem...very romantic yesss.. liked it very much..the best poem of your poetry...10++++++

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Kuji Soliman 27 September 2009

Lovely, i loved it really...: ]

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sara }i{ 17 September 2009

it's awsome.....u r so good thanks for sharing :)

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

Very beautiful expression. But the beloved seems to be in dreams more than in reality. Nice verse.

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syaz wafea 25 August 2009

the sweetest of ur collection! u might be just as sweet..huuu~

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 July 2009

sweet words sweet verses written by sweet Dana! :) 10+

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